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mourn_ex ([info]mourn_ex) wrote,
@ 2005-03-19 14:40:00


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Mourn has and will, be writing again, spect more :)

Angel continues

"Faster! can we.. we need to.. we must go faster!" Dual black canes swept this way and that in a lazy routine, clearing a colourless space of torrents, streams and seas. In their absense new water would rush down from the storm only to be pushed to one side. "Hey Lady, this is Sereneity Plaza in noon rushour. I'm doin' the best I can", a tanned driver responded, looking back at the emotional young woman in his rear seat. He turned around analyzing the picture in front of him, searching for openings, possible routes, and ways to get through this impossible traffic.

The slight mist created by the cascading precipitation made this hired transport think of the path already travelled. When he was a kid he had wanted to be a race driver. Whizzing around turns with tremendous speed, delicately shifting gears to navigate hairpins, battling with other great drivers for pole position. The champagne on the podium, the beautiful girls, the fame and fortune... When he was older he realised racing was for the select few. He'd wanted to become a chauffeur, a driver for the select few. For those with fame and fortune: beautiful singers and actresses, the private wheels for wealthy buisnessmen. He had become a taxi driver in this bustling city, he was everyones speedy wheels getting C from A to B.

This driver blinked. Reality flooded his mind instantly washing his memories of dreams. Gazing through his windscreen past the lazy routine of two black lines he caught the eye of a strict, red, round, circular light. A thought rose in his mind, less of a thought more of an image. An image of a daughter, a daughter following a father yet a father strolling slowly away, widening the gap between them. The daughter froze, so did he. Her eyes were blue,so were his, she began to cry.. beautiful sad tears; helpless.

The eyes of the red light flickered and shut tight. The driver smiled whilst revving his engine, he uttered something to himself, a twinkle in his eye. A new light began to shine, and flicker like the first, this one the colour of sun; a deep vivid amber. He was a little boy again, all he needed was one thing.. Answering his prayer some omnipotent being revealed a final signal: A green light shining bright



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[info]ontheweakend
2005-03-20 13:34 (link)
join [info]sup_qt

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[info]trivking_64
2005-04-10 03:52 (link)
I just happened to notice that you "friended" me on GJ quite a while ago --- please forgive me for not acknowledging you sooner! Hello!

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[info]mourn_ex
2005-04-11 04:32 (link)
wow a reply :O months , and a reply, no two :O thank you thank you, im not usually into poetry but i was just looking into what a blog was and i saw your poem "the things i meant to say" i read it over and over again, realizing at least this poem must be read out aloud for full effect..

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Emoness
[info]out_of_words
2005-05-07 10:56 (link)
Hello, you commented me. You sound very....emo. Like Shaun. Male or Female? Couldn't figure it out. Sorry.--Kristin

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[info]trivking_64
2005-10-30 16:04 (link)
Thank you so much...I deeply appreciate it

Tom

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[info]out_of_words
2005-05-07 14:33 (link)
Hey, me again. I've been reading you're stuff. You're work is....amazing. I am so captivated by your creative use of words. I'd like to talk to you furthur. My AIM name is PhotoPhreak05 and my yahoo is piggies_go_oink_oh_yeah06@yahoo.com. I'd love to speak with you more, so if you get a chance, comment me back. --Kristin

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[info]mourn_ex
2005-05-07 18:19 (link)
who's Shaun?
yah i try to be the big anoyamous person online sometimes, erm *looks down* ahh im male yep thats what i am
woah ooh 2 new replies its as if christmas has come early, umm well i havent got yahoo installed, i do have an acoount but i hate yahoo.. hmm go on then i'll install it :( dont you use msn no? well im installing yahoo so no matter :D cya tommorow hopefully or is that today..

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[info]mourn_ex
2005-05-08 01:26 (link)
actually my yahoo doesent like me, so i got AIM and added u to that instead hopefully you'll be on sometime, theres like a 5-7 hour time diffrence tho

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[info]out_of_words
2005-05-08 10:30 (link)
I'm on all the time. Where are you from? hehe, I have Msn too if you really want it all you have to do is ask. So, it's 10am here, wonder what time it is there? hmmmm, well, better get going. msn is photophreak05@hotmail.com
--Kristin

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Very good
(Anonymous)
2005-10-10 07:25 (link)
Very very good man.

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